Styles test w/5D's comic

Yess, I did do a new comic. I was trying to attempt a new style of drawing with more angular faces, but it came out as chibi-like as ever. I decided to draw a comic/storyboard thing based on a fanfic oneshot I had in mind, and it looks like it may turn out to be two pages long. The first page is sketched out below, but it may be kinda hard to see-it's not inked.

 

( Kidling Days )