http://pijsan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] pijsan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] northwind_gale 2010-10-06 04:13 pm (UTC)

reposted twice djshkhf HTMLFAILAAAAAARGH

Hurray, art post! :D I think my favorites are the Magical Polar God Girl Loki, Beesei, Pichyuu Learned English, the Pokemon, Kizuna and the Black Witch, and the expressions for Raichyuu! \o/

I see improvement, especially in your faces (and eyes) and how you draw Yusei's hair, they've all got more shape to them! Also, more dynamic poses yeaaaah. And using ink is pretty daring! It forces you to not dwell on mistakes, that's for sure. XD;
Also seconding Immicolia - more Pokemon and GX please. 8D; /biaaaas

And I do have some crits. :o Loki's pretty great, it just looks like the thumb on his left hand is on the wrong side. I think it's because of how you have some of his other fingers positioned - we should be able to see more of his palm and his pointer and middle finger.

Now for some redlines (I apologize for using MS Paint, Photoshop's been eating up waaay too much memory though lately :/):

redline

Main Points: The proportions (fingers too thin and pointy, arms too long, fell too close to his knees/legs too short). I couldn't draw his legs how I wanted, not enough room. D: But, you get the idea? ;o;

radline

MP: Same issue of proportions with the first. Erf, I don't like how I drew the one facing forward, made his left shoulder too short. xD; Sorry. :c Just know his shoulders were too wide on yours.

rudline

MP: Just a quickie to show you that the jawline connects to the ear, it does not go behind it.

...I'll stop nitpicking now. D|;

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