http://pijsan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] pijsan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] northwind_gale 2010-07-26 03:31 am (UTC)

I have redlines!

sludgecrit

Main points: more curve for bridge of nose, shape of eye (note that it took only two strokes to make), bring up the knee, make hand bigger. And don't mind the hair, I was just foolin' around. xD;

rosecrit

Main Points: bend leg more (at the knee), make arms and hands larger. That aside, you did really good on this one~. |3

crowcrit

Main points: well I'm more comfortable with how this redline turned out, but if anything is unclear please let me know! :] Also little Aslla Piscu is so cute. ;3;

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